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Death is wispearing in my ear.
The silence is gathering my cries.
Suicide is flirting with me.
It begs for me to die.
The lies are gaining up on me.
They're trying to bury me alive.
The cold wind is calling me.
They want me to give in to the lies.
The reaper is showing me,
all the things I've done.
The soul that is inside of me,
is praying for the light to come.
The darkness is surrounding me.
They want me to give in.
My hope has grown so week.
I'm afraid the spark has to end.
So as I lay here thinking about,
everything I've become.
I drown myself in sorrow,
but than break through myself to a world of bliss to come.
©2007-2009 ~BlackSilence22
:iconblacksilence22:

Author's Comments

You'll have to tell me what you think of it I was just bored and thought I would write a poem that relates to my name. You have to give me credit though I just made it up on the spot. I'm so much better with poems about sorrow even if I don't feel that way, or at least not at the point. I actully am pretty better now compared to my old poetry. I think I might write a love one soon. Idk I haven't wrote in a while, I hope I'm still good. Enjoy anyway. Much love <3
~BlackSilence22

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I must express my deeper feelings for this poem – it reminds me of my past – well, what the poem contains in general has nothing to relate to me, but about your comments – on making them up on the spot – that means inspiration came – I love inspiration because from one line you solemnly come up out of thin air becomes the greatest artistic ability. Now I remember I used to write on the darker side of poetry it seemed so easy because I had all these feeling of rage – meaning I had all these thoughts – it was just so easy to write down – I loved that – but know I’m full of love so that’s all I can write about – the happy feeling – I love your poetry – by the way my favorite is The Black Silence – love it!

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